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Bone
23 Feb 2005, 12:28am
Well our history assignment was to write a note home as tohu we were soliders in the trenches of WW1 i tired make mine as motivating as possible and hoping get 20/20 on it tell me when u guys think.

By- Anthony O’Neill



May 2nd, 1914

Dear Mom and Dad

I am so overjoyed with emotions to finally be able to write home and tell you I am still alive. War has been so tough the ghastly sites have disturbed me to my core, I don’t know how much longer I Can take this Mental anguish I am facing every second day and night. There is no Moral anymore, so many of my fellow soldiers are letting them self be Tore to pieces by the Germans machine gun fire. These machine guns they must have been constructed by Satan him self they tear everything down, hundreds died from their fire the first day into battle. Our Foolish commander sending us straight into their fury of flying lead. My desire to come home is so great I query my mind if it is worth shooting my self just to come home. My friend Derry Gladstone Was killed yesterday. He did it to save me I don’t know how I can live with the guilt. A Grenade came into our trench just feet away, Derry Knew this would mean death for both of us if nothing were done. He sacrificed him self to save me, throwing his body onto it. The Germans also tried using mustard gas on us luckily the wind blew it away from my post but it took the lives of many comrades and some are starting to linger into death now, the site of these now Transformed monsters is devastating their eyes bulge out but they are Unable open them, their skin has boils all over their body. I can hear them screaming at agony, some of them tied to their beds makes the beds shake and rattle. It is worst whenever there is any silence their screams can be heard throughout the trenches. I can only pray and hope I do not ever have face an agony such as that, I am very hungry a good portion of our rations were ruined by rain and the Bombardment of shells on us. Many troops are shell shocked I have witnessed some unable to stop shaking, some talking incomprehensible Tongue. I miss you all so very much and I hope to see you sometime whether that be here on earth or in heaven may god be with us all. I must end this letter now the bombings have started again but I unsure if they ever stopped.

Love,
Nicolas Waylett

entropy
23 Feb 2005, 12:57am
What with the capitalization? And I didn't read all the way through, but the first few sentences tend to run-on a bit. Just letting you know :thumbsup:

Bone
23 Feb 2005, 1:30am
which capitilazation? the ones after a period... errr but theres a few mis-captialized ones because i typed it in notepad and then put it in word and it like messed up ro something when doing the grammar and spelling check oh well he doesnt count spelling and that he just eanted test our knowledge he taught us today bout mustard gas and the trenches and stuff.

Nomad
23 Feb 2005, 2:34am
Your letter is dated May 2nd, 1914. The assassination of Archduke Ferdinand by Gavrilo Princip was not until June 28th, 1914. The war didn't officially start until August 4th, generally speaking.

Poison gas was first used by the French, not the Germans. The Germans first deployed chlorine gas at the second battle of Ypres (1915), but French and Algerian soldiers were the most commonly inflicted with the poisonous gas in that battle mustard gas itself wasn't used until 1917 and that was against Canadian and French soldiers. The British then used it later to clear the Hindenburg line in late 1917. Being that you're British and writing from the early stages of the war, it is unlikely you would have personally encountered chemical warfare. Huge losses of moral didn't happen until about Spring of 1915, and the overwhelming disenchantment came around 1917 and was spurred more on the Eastern front with the Russian Revolution.

Also, you said you were going for motivation for the war, yet this seems more like motivation against the war.

entropy
23 Feb 2005, 3:04am
Hahaha. You've just been Historically Thrax'd (by none other than his brother!);D:D

Thrax
23 Feb 2005, 3:12am
It runs in the family.

Nomad
23 Feb 2005, 3:12am
History is all that I am ;[

pseudonym
23 Feb 2005, 4:42am
lol, I remember when I was good at history. It was fun to piss off the LS&A majors. They never liked the ME guy coming in and beating up on them ;D

Bone
23 Feb 2005, 10:01pm
yes mustard gas was made by french but germans used it and i meant to put may 2nd 1915... dang and he didnt go into alot of detail when mustard gas was used and i meant it was supposed like motivate emotions not why the war started.. i love history i just not good at remembering certain things like dates... sorry

Nomad
23 Feb 2005, 10:13pm
Well, in 1915 it still wouldn't have been used.

Bone
23 Feb 2005, 10:29pm
he wouldnt have crtizied it however because he didnt go into detail wehn it was used so he cant really blame me and hes a really nice teacer... elts us leave class to go get food from vending machine and stuffl

Nomad
24 Feb 2005, 2:48pm
Wonderful to know this is where my first set of taxes filed in April will be going :|

Camman
24 Feb 2005, 6:35pm
Wonderful to know this is where my first set of taxes filed in April will be going :|

Yeah or not....since his location says Canada.

Clutch
24 Feb 2005, 9:37pm
This could be a thread of nothing but pwnage, hahah.

Bone
24 Feb 2005, 9:55pm
i got the homework back today got 20/20 hurrah.