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Lincoln
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Zeta Disconnect: Fetch (part 1)

Zeta Disconnect, Part 1 is a science fiction serial by CB Droege. The six chapters of part 1 will be published each Monday on our front page.
“You know what I like best about these briefings?” asked the white bearded, long-faced man. The agent merely raised an eyebrow, so the man in the lab coat continued. “I like that I can tell you the same jokes every time, and you always think that they’re funny.”
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Winga
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

Can't wait for next week...
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sharkydart
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

great... I need to know what happens now!
GHoosdum
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GHoosdum
10,369 Posts

Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

Hehehehe "The War of the Consonants"...
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Lincoln
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

I'm accepting bribes to see chapter 2 I'm enjoying it thus far myself.
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Thrax
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

Was this on your website some time ago? I have a vague recollection of it. I like it so far.
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CB
The Butterflyman
CB
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

Yes, portion of the draft was on my showcase site for awhile, but I think very few people saw it there.

I like the boomerang logo.
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QCH
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

Like it so far.... Looking forward to reading the next chapter!!!
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Lincoln
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Lincoln
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Zeta Disconnect, Part 1 (chapter 2)

Chapter 2 has been published!
“Z-4Q woke and sat up. The room hadn’t changed much. It was dimly lit by emergency lights on the walls. There was a pile of rubble in one corner. There was, of course, no time portal and no team of technicians bustling around. A thick layer of dust covered the floor. He stood up, but was immediately struck by nausea and headache, so he sat back down. He would have to spend a few minutes recovering from the jolt of time-travel. There was a mild feeling of pulling from the inside, all over his body. He knew that this feeling was a result of his connection to his own time, and that the feeling would fade after a few hours, although the connection itself would remain.
Cheers
QCH
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

Another FINE chapter... I'm into this, keep them coming!!!
GHoosdum
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

I have a feeling there's going to be a big pissed-off dude with bare feet in Z-4Q's future.
Lincoln
Snapperhead
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

Chapter 3 has been published this afternoon.
QCH
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

AWESOME... Again. I really hope you have tons more of this story ready for print. I'll be mighty ticked if it just ends with a "and he lived happily ever after"
GHoosdum
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GHoosdum
10,369 Posts

Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

I'm enjoying the story line. I did, however, do a double take when the part about the keyboard sewn into Zaq's pants came up... the people must have thought he was playing pocket pool! Is that really better than him appearing to talk to himself? Can't the time travel agency afford a throat mic?

Q, I can assure you that it does not end "happily ever after" - though that would be a rather ironic statement in the context of a time travel story. What I gather from CB is that he has the first six chapters submitted, and he's working as hard as he can on the next set, so that he does not leave a long break between publications.
sharkydart
I put on my robe 'n wizard hat
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

;lakjsdlkfjsakljflkjskjfjaw2ekjrwe i can't wait until monday
QCH
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QCH
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

I NEED MY FIX.... it's time for more Zeta!!!!!
Lincoln
Snapperhead
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

After one-week off for the US holiday, Chapter 4 has been published!

...and it has resulted in a Zeta Disconnect trifecta on the front page
GHoosdum
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GHoosdum
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

Best one yet, I think, though a little too fast-paced. It conveys a sense of urgency, but the descriptions could have gone a little deeper once he dropped in on Sanchez.
CB
The Butterflyman
CB
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

I kind-of feel bad that it's taking up the whole front page... Is no one submitting anything else right now?
GHoosdum
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

There are other articles in the queue, but I think yours require less editing on Matt's part.
Lincoln
Snapperhead
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

Don't feel bad mate, I'm just glad something's getting up there

GH... touche!
GHoosdum
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GHoosdum
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

GH... touche!
That was a shot at myself rather than a shot at you.
profdlp
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

...GH... touche!
Awww...he's not that touchie...
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Lincoln
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

Chapter 5 is live!
GHoosdum
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GHoosdum
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

It's all starting to come together now!
QCH
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

Very nice indeed.....
CB
The Butterflyman
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

Well, I guess it's not too bad that Matt has forgotten to post this week's episode again. It gives me a chance to rewrite the next few chapters...

I dropped my pen-drive out of my pocket today, and now my computer wont recognize it... When I shake it, it rattles inside

That's where the next chapters of Zeta Disconnect were being stored while I worked on them...

At least now, I have an extra week before they are expected to be finished...
GHoosdum
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

Rattles inside!
CB
The Butterflyman
CB
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

Yea... I'm assuming that's the pen drive's way of telling me that I'm not getting my data back...


I thought those things were almost indestructable...
GHoosdum
tequilavangelist
GHoosdum
10,369 Posts

Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

It depends on the brand & model, I suppose. My normal Sandisk drive with the plastic case seems a bit flimsy, but the Sandisk micro with metal case could probably get run over by a car without incident.

I'd recommend cracking open the plastic case to see what is loose - if it's just the USB plug or something, then you could probably solder it back together.
Lincoln
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

Matt has forgotten to post this week's episode again.
I didn't have the stomach for dueling the control panel when I got off of work last night Here we go...
GHoosdum
tequilavangelist
GHoosdum
10,369 Posts

Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

A nice, cryptic ending for Part 1. Fix that USB drive and write faster!
Lincoln
Snapperhead
Lincoln
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

Comments before the link!

Zeta Disconnect, Part 1: Chapter 6. Thus ends part one
Donut
Veteran Icrontian
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

CB Droege,

Thanks for the story so far. I just read the first 6 chapters, I need more!

Fantastic story, Thank-you.
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CB
The Butterflyman
CB
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

Thanks. Chapter 7 is done. As long as I can Manage to E-mail it to our esteemed editor in time, it will be up on Monday.
Zanthian
Icrontian
Zanthian
824 Posts

Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

I guess you couldn't email it on time?
I am disapointed.
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CB
The Butterflyman
CB
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

I e-mailed it on time. Matt has had Chapter 7 since Friday.
Zanthian
Icrontian
Zanthian
824 Posts

Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

Hey Matt, we are dying to read more of this story... where are you at?
GHoosdum
tequilavangelist
GHoosdum
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

Matt is on vacation until the 18th. He will be posting content infrequently, when he manages to gain internet access.
Lincoln
Snapperhead
Lincoln
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

... where are you at?
In Kona, Hawai'i. I'll get it started again either this Monday or next.
primesuspect
The Icrontic Guy
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28,248 Posts

Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

bring me some coffee
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GHoosdum
tequilavangelist
GHoosdum
10,369 Posts

Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

Forget coffee - bring us back some pineapple wine!
Zanthian
Icrontian
Zanthian
824 Posts

Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

Please say we are getting a new part Today.
CB
The Butterflyman
CB
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Re: Zeta Disconnect, Part 1

Matt's back right? So, we should be...
CB
The Butterflyman
CB
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http://www.short-media.com/forum/showthread.php?t=49337
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